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Renegades July Update

Jul 21
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I kept starting and stopping and re-working the plot... so where am I at, now?


[Spoiler warning - don't read if you haven't finished Compromised!]


The Big Update


The plot, at least at the highest level, is finished. There will undoubtedly be tweaks during the writing process but I have the general chronology and geography set.


Speaking of geography, here's a sneak peak for you:


Chapter outline of Renegades
Chapter outline of Renegades

...Is that Russia I am opening with? Yes. Am I going to explain more? Not yet, but I will reveal that the Prologue is centred on Nikolay.


Xavier, Nikolay, and Stefano


Nikolay will feature strongly in Renegades, as will Thailand. Xavier will also be back in the air, where he belongs.


Thai white bellied sea eagle
Thai white bellied sea eagle

But what about Stefano? I don't want to give away too many spoilers, but I can reveal that Chapter 1 is also in Russia and Kazakhstan.


Stefano is a comlpex character who needs more page time. I think all of us have a Stefano in our lives - someone or something that we feel we don't deserve and so we don't reach for.


Personally, I am not very good at judging when I am being justifiably reserved versus when I am being a coward. For better or worse, life is more interesting if you take a leap of faith.


Am I hiding anything else in my minimalist chapter headings?


Yes, and I assume you are all used to this by now (sorry).


Renegades jumps through East Africa, cuts through India, traverses the Bay of Bengal and the Andaman Sea... you get the idea.


A strategically positioned world map
A strategically positioned world map

I may have dropped a spoiler of two in the google maps screenshot above.


How long will I keep you waiting?


If everything goes well, I will have a complete draft finished this year.


I know how fast I can write when I am in the zone, and I no longer have to balance studying for profressional exams (phew). HOWEVER, I also know there are times when it's best to let the manuscript breathe. I will keep you all updated on progress as I go.


Editing takes a while, so early next year is a reasonable estimate. If you are dying to get your hands on a copy beforehand, I'm always happy to have Beta and ARC readers. Feedback, as always, is my primary goal, and pre-release feedback is as valuable (if not more so) as post-release reviews.


Final comments (for now)


Thank you for your support and joining me on my writing journey!


If you have read on KU and want your own copies, or want to send copies of Air Superiority/Compromised to friends, I am making them free in August (for as many days as Amazon allows in 90 day intervals).


August 22 and August 23 = Air Superiority is free


August 29 and August 30 = Air Superiority AND Compromised are free


The delay is because I forgot I published Compromise a week later (oops).


I'll update in a newsletter closer to the time.


As always, if you want to get in contact, please don't hesistate to leave a comment or send me an email. You're very welcome to message me on Instagram, too. I am not the fastest to respond (my personal life is busy and my phone is low on the priority list more often than not) but I do read what you send and I will respond (eventually).


I hope you all have a lovely summer!


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