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The First Flight

Aug 17
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Chapter 2 is done!


Well, no, it inevitably will look completely different once time and editing has worked its magic, but the first pass draft is done. Words are on the page.


Me after finishing Chapter 2

It's roughly 10k words like Chapter 1, so I'm at thirty thousand words, already. I may need to dial down my vision for Renegades at this rate.


Air Superiority and Compromised were around 90k words. Would a 120k word count be the end of the world? Probably not, but it's indicative of a pacing problem, so I'll have to keep an eye on it.


Why has it taken me so long?


This chapter was a beast. It was the first chapter that required multiple aircraft doing multiple manoeuvres since Chapter 1 of Compromised. I wanted to make sure it didn't disappoint, and took my time revising who is doing what and where. After the lack of air combat in Compromised, there was a lot of anticipation and internal pressure!


But now I remember why I wrote Air Superiority. The 3D picture is a lot of fun, and it's why I love writing cycling, too. I should have become a DS instead of a patent attorney!


P.S., I'll send a reminder about Air Superiority and Compromised being free later this week, closer to the weekend.


P.P.S., sorry for not updating much. Work is busy, I am fighting off barnehage bugs, and what free time I have has been spent on Chapter 2!


Renegades word count (17 August 2026): 31151

 
 
 

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